Why Was She Better? Poem by dyna robison

Why Was She Better?



what did she give you that your family didnt?
what has she done for you that we havent done for you first?
what is so great about her that you left your own children for someone elses kids?
where we not good enough? was there something i could have done for you to stay? your SON needs you here with him I need you here with me! ! !
what is so great about her? tell me one good reason and i will leve you alone for good just tell me and i will put you out of my mind for good father i love you and i always will i just want to know one thing 'why is she better? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Wheeler 08 May 2008

one person commented and said all men are like this, but i say only a coward is like it. if this is true, the man just can't deal with things and is a rotten cowardice fool. if it is just inspired, very good. either way, i liked it.

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Barbara Terry 05 May 2008

I don't know of any man who has staying power, Dyna. Most are selfish, and think only of themselves. Most are greedy because they want everything handed to them, whether they deserve it or not. Most are so bored with life, they don't stay with one family forever, but move on to someone else's family. I can feel the emotion, and heartfelt anguish in these lies, as you were writing them. There are many men out the like your father, they just refuse to admit they are wrong. Many will relate to this poem in different ways, but the pain will always be the same. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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