Why Bother (Ps-This Isn'T As Good As Some Of My Others Because I Wrote It A Few Years Ago So Please Dont Leave Comments That It Needs Improving.Thanx) Poem by Marie ...

Why Bother (Ps-This Isn'T As Good As Some Of My Others Because I Wrote It A Few Years Ago So Please Dont Leave Comments That It Needs Improving.Thanx)

Rating: 4.3


why do i bother
when they don't care
why do i suffer
if life isn't fair
why do we dream
if they never come true
why do i live
live without you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffany Reeves 04 September 2008

That was aewsome. that is exactly what i have been asking myself for the longest and u know i still don't have any answer's

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Nahomy Dolcine 16 February 2008

wow that was something, u really dont need any improvments, your poems rock! !

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I Hate Myself 'I Hate Life' 09 February 2008

There are no improvements needed. I thought it was great!

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Kristy Artmann 04 January 2008

I enjoyed reading your poem angel of suicide; it doesn't matter what others think when you love and feel what you write in my opinion. ~Kristy~

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Ronald Stroman 31 December 2007

all Poets improve on their creations. your poem was poetically fine to me. i'm not expert. take care.

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