# Whole Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Whole

Rating: 4.8


what am i
iam not just me
what are you
you are not just you
what are we
we are not just a 'we'
we all yearn to be
to be....
a part of the whole
or may be the 'WHOLE'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 19 May 2009

play on words good one

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 May 2009

a write with deep meaning...worth reflecting for short but great concepts flows to make us know who we are in the true sense Whole...great...intelligible ideas for the whole world.. GREAT Sam...10++++

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Deepti Agarwal 21 May 2009

oh how ironical...just today only i came up with my version of 'Whole'... its named 'truth' n yrs compliments well... :)

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2009

we all are parts of the whole Universe...true words SLN

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Naidz Ladia 19 May 2009

we have our ownself.we are a whole..we are also a part of a whole.

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Carl Harris 19 May 2009

Well, like that other poem, 'The Self, ' this appears to be a play upon words, and in that respect, it's a good poem. However, other than that play on words, it doesn't say much, samanyan. Carl.

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