# Why Am I Always On Line Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Why Am I Always On Line

Rating: 5.0


am the sun from dawn
am the moon after the dawn
that's why i am there on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 October 2009

The narrator is always on line: the sun from dawn and the moon afer the dawn..interestingly stated, Sam. A 10 for sure. thanks for commenting on 'Color Me Autumn'

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Sandra Martyres 19 October 2009

Interesting explanation - justifying the need to be always on line....

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Tsira Goge 19 October 2009

samanyan, What fine the self-justification..10... Tsira

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