Who Who Poem by Linda Hepner

Who Who

Rating: 4.3


The cat’s on the table, the geese in the yard,
the parrot is screeching, the dog’s on his guard,
the brown leaves are falling, the succah is wet
and squirrels are stealing, the deadline’s not met,

the squirrels seem curvy and loveable but
they gobble each corncob and bury each nut,
and with them my minutes and hours and days
belonging to others’ demands and the ways

each person I love shunts my dreaming aside;
I cannot say no and I cannot deride
a request or a need or a word or a cry
of love me or help me - if not woe betide

that parroty conscience, those pestering meows,
that autumnal anguish, the dry dusty house,
the voiceover screeching, the bark and the howl,
the fear of the silence, the hoot of the owl.


(LRH/10.1.07)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 17 November 2007

That's what you get for being super-fit and super-energetic: your loved ones see you as a mighty rock! Well-conveyed sense of frustration and dismay. Especially love the last stanza. And the masterly rhyme as ever. Love, Gina.

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Raynette Eitel 20 October 2007

Oh, how many times have I felt the same way! Very well put....and your rhymes are absolutely seamless. Raynette

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