Who When Where Why What And How. Poem by klaudia ortiz

Who When Where Why What And How.

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How can you expect me to give you up that easily?
If I worked hard for what we had, building our love from nothing but scratch.
What made you change your mind?
If you said you didn't want anyone but ME.
Why is it over?
If the love we had was so pure and real.
Where did we go wrong?
If it all seemed to go perfectly fine.
When would I forget you?
If I burried you in my soul because i didnt plan to let you go.
Who do you think you are?
Breaking my heart in two.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monica Sevilla 22 February 2010

nice poem! ! ! keep up! ! aja! ! keep moving on!

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Romeo Della Valle 08 January 2010

Brava! Klaudia, for every dark day you went through, there shall be a blessed golden sunshine day waiting for you and sooner than what you may think, you will see the light at the end of the tunnel....you have shown to me and the entire world your talent, God Bless You! It is a great beginning for you, since you are in the right track and the right site, PH. keep it up! thanks for sharing,10+++Love and Peace...

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Stephanie McKean 08 January 2010

Lies hurt more then anything. Which you expressed, They will realize they lost true love with you. They will come back. You just have to be strong enough. Never let someone become your everything. Brokenheart always seems to follow them.

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