Who Is There? Poem by Sree Kala Kala

Who Is There?

Rating: 5.0


Who is that hiding there
and
makes me revolve
along the earth
in the sky,
away the sun, facing the stars,
through the space and vaccumed
thoughts?
What I want to know is that
in the end
how much will
I be here!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 12 August 2008

Never born never gone u r destined to be here immersed in thoughts good write welcome to the real hunter...word monger...

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Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2008

good question sreekala...revolving each day we lose, incremental...a poem with good insight welcome to hunter land...10/10

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Tom Balch 11 August 2008

A lovely and well written piece, regards Tom

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Well thought poem. Nice philosophy. Carry on. Good Luck- Pradeep

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2008

...well expressed....10 has been clicked

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