Whitsundays Poem by ben siemsen

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I love the completly candid nature of your writings, it is very defiant and shows what you are thinking, even if it doesn't make sense to the rest of the world. I think it may be a little more effective if you write full words (i.e. 'are' instead of 'r') But lovely poem altogether! I love it :)

nicely done :) <3 mandy

Nice Poem and has a good message Best Wishez, Angel

good job ben! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like it alot