White Rice Poem by anais vionet

White Rice

Rating: 4.7


White is for rice and brides - ready to commit.
Whites for ghosts and clouds or even carnations
but it should never, ever, be used for privilege
or worse yet, as poetic inspiration.

I've been waiting for the urge to write
while facing an ugly screen of white.
Waiting for the vowels to fall into place,
for words to congeal and finally displace
the awful, foreboding, blank white space.

Learning is our struggle, our crown of thorns.
The more we study and prepare for fall,
the more excited I get to reenter those halls.
34 days until classes start. For fall weather,
and the bee hum of crowded life in the dorms.

My roommates and I are like a single, nameless thing
- an emolument that happens to have 6 heads.
We've beaten the freshman "imposter syndrome, "
and we're ready to bring sophomore year home -
together - no muss, no fuss - I love that for us.

Thursday, July 28, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: summer,fall,class,university,friends,teen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 31 July 2022

'We've beaten the freshman 'imposter syndrome, ' and we're ready to bring sophomore year home - together - no muss, no fuss - I love that for us.' - The poem concludes very nicely. The title is intriguing.

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anais vionet 02 August 2022

Thank you. I liked the name and it fit as well any other I came up with.

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Kim Barney 28 July 2022

Five stars for this preamble to your next big adventure!

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anais vionet 28 July 2022

Thanks Kim

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