White-Out Poem by Nancy Ames

White-Out



(This poem is a dramatic monologue spoken by an implied character)


'The snow is falling faster
and I could never say
I'd save her from disaster.
I had to go away.

I'd never seen her face
when she came on to me.
She seemed so commonplace.
I take it when it's free.

Her child with my blue eyes
is looking through a fence
at jungle and bright skies
and scenes of violence.

I can't see six feet further
than the windshield of my truck.
I didn't mean to hurt her.
She just ran out of luck.

Thank God I'm almost home! '
Then everything went black.
In twisted steel and chrome,
he rode the railroad track.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 28 December 2007

Very well written. The drama builds to an ultimate conclussion.

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Nancy Ames

Nancy Ames

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
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