Where Were You When I Was....! ? Poem by anne adam

Where Were You When I Was....! ?

Rating: 4.8


Where were you …?
When i was sleeping alone, thinking about you
When i was in my room crying out for you
When i was sating, thinking if you care like I do
Only you can answer this

p.s. (i love you) 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 20 February 2010

where were you, when i was burn and broken? while the days slipped by from my window watching.. :) Need to work a little with your way of presentation..otherwise, the feeling and emotion is very nice in your poems. Best wishes to ya! !

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 29 January 2009

Lovely poem Anne, it explains the beauty of a spotless love. A bit sad, yet soooooo elegant.10 for you.

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Vinod Kumar 22 January 2009

Another dedication of true love it comes in the pleasant heart carring pure blood not in the complicated brain, thanks for sharing,10

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