Where Have The Swallows Gone? Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Where Have The Swallows Gone?

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Where Have The Swallows Gone?

Where have the swallows gone?
Could they have been swallowed by the inhabitants?

I do not know perhaps
they flew through our WhatsApp

we see them flying, but we couldn't catch them
now they remain as our attachments,

Where have the swallows gone?
Don't you really know?

in which courtyard, in which regiment?
Please be attentive, check your attachments

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes I got that ITCH, creating Free Verse for fun with my wordpun. ENJOY! One swallow makes no summer yet, a Dutch Saying
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 04 May 2022

What an ingenious use of words! I really enjoyed the pun but there's more to this poem than just humour. It has depth. It has an undercurrent of melancholy at our disconnection with nature and obsession with technology.

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You hit the nails on the head, dear Nosheen! Thank you so much for your great support, I am very happy to read your precious words. Thank YOU!

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Dear Nosheen, exactly thought, dear Poetess, so happy to see you here, dear, where have you been. YOU are the only one who comes up with this deepest thought, WOW! I am very happy to read your response here

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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