Where Are You Tonight Poem by Jessy Liz

Where Are You Tonight

Rating: 3.6


Where are you tonight?
The world is so quiet
But my heart is pounding so loud without you.
And what’s the sky look like?
Dark and pierced with diamonds,
Maybe as near to you as you are far from me…
From where you’re standing.
Are you dying like I am?
Every time I hear the click on the other end
Well, love, I’m hopeless against those tears.
Are you lying like I am?
I tell you, “Yes, I’m fine tonight…”
But I couldn’t be less alright.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 22 September 2006

this has a good honest tone to it. many of whom can relate. i can't imagine who would give low ratings- insecure men. because your style breathes with confidence. and i look forward to reading more.

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This one reminds me of a girl named Vanessa.... Good write

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