Where Am I? Poem by koto wanderer

Where Am I?

Rating: 5.0


the scent of mild air,
I was a shining chick.

the feel of snow,
I was a lovable teenager.

the sound of rain,
I was a naive child.

the touch of typhoon,
I had a friend.

the moment goes,
I am behind the moment.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Lloyd 11 December 2006

What a beautiful, sensuous, thought provoking write! Jon x.

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Alfredo Jacques 10 December 2006

I just wanted to say great poem it really makes me think.

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Suzan Gumush 10 December 2006

Excellent verse. give you ten Best wishes suzan

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Udit Kumar Sahoo 10 December 2006

excellent first poem in PH...tou hold a lot of promise... ....udit 10.12.2006.

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