Where Poem by Marrissa Skiles

Where

Rating: 4.3


Where do I go when I'm surrounded yet all alone?
I'm not sure anymore where I belong.
Everyone acts like they know me. But I don't even
Know myself it's seems so wrong.
I sit in a corner and I am found by unwanted attention
I didn't ask for this.
I'm so alone. I'm so sad. I'm so insecure. No one this
Side of me.
I cry so many tears from a hearts Brocken trail of many
Lies. No one knows me.
Can you take the time to sit and look in my eyes? Beyond
What you see?
Is there anyone that can learn and see the real me?
You always say I'm so pretty. Don't you understand that
Just plays in more to my insecurity? ?
I only want a love that's real. Something that lasts through
Every year.
Not a love that's based on what you see. Beauty fades in time
WHAT ABOUT THE REST OF ME? ?

Wednesday, July 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Heartache
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm insecure. I feel I won't ever find true love based on who I really am
It's a source of true heartache. I'm so sad and alone.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2014

This is your first poem posted on this site, and it is really a good one. You feel lonely, you feel insecure, you are unsure of finding true love in life. These feelings of loneliness, sadness, hopelessness and insecurity can be overcome by choosing some good friends to whom you can open yourself, can unburden yourself. You are just 16 and you have 'miles to go'. Writing poetry is a good way to release pent up emotions. From your first poem I can see that you write well, can express your emotions well. Keep on writing. One who has so much emotion can write excellent poetry that everyone can relate to.

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