When, When Shall I Tell You? Poem by Anne Yun

When, When Shall I Tell You?

Rating: 4.7


When i put names in us between
with no doubt, they win
a game all silences are waiting
for such a long time cause a dust rising
of course, you have seen
i am not an arrogant queen
but sometimes a demanding rose
asking for your love license

Thursday, April 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sometimes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 02 November 2016

I love to read your lines. You bring such wonder and beauty out of the arrangement of your words. Thank you for sharing your work, and, please, keep writing!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 April 2016

i am not an arrogant queen but sometimes a demanding rose asking for your love license Beautiful line Anne, Keep the trend up. One day you must win the license not only from the man of your dreams but also from your fans of poems like us. A 10 for it.

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Anne Yun 22 April 2016

thank you, sir, it's so kind of you to give me this warm encouragement!

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