When We Were Younger Poem by Harvey Horst

When We Were Younger

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Dear, Raymond
when we were younger
I hit you over the head
with a milk jug.

I'm sorry about that.
But these things happen,
there is no helping it.
Yet still, I think about it.

How the milk leaped
out of the broken glass
then dove down
to the plank vinyl.

The way you fell after it.
So limp, I didn't know
how limp you'd become.
And I think about it constantly

Your burgundy blood
swirling in the pure white.
I can't help but think of it.
What a waste of milk.

Thursday, May 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: brotherhood,friends,violence,blood,milk,thinking,apology
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True Story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owen Potts 06 May 2021

yes

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Cowboy Ron Williams 06 May 2021

I couldn't help it. I had to chuckle at the last line. What a waste of milk indeed!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 May 2021

Beautiful recpitulation of the adolescence with deep realization of the past.. magnificently drafted!

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Pamela Lutwyche 06 May 2021

Good story, don't cry over spilt milk. Kids,

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Harvey Horst

Harvey Horst

St. Louis, Missouri
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