When The Pain No Longer Hurts Poem by Collette Y Anderson Williams

When The Pain No Longer Hurts

Rating: 4.5


His hand outstretched,
as he tugged the tail
of her garb.
He gently yanked her to
his bosom -
then with his arms,
he enveloped her.
Such warm embrace
she had long forgotten -
and it was there that he held her
for moments long...

Then suddenly,
his emotions became shades
of black and white -
his trusting notions became
like quicksand and struck
like deadly flashes of lightning,
while he lunged his firm hand
through the cavity
that housed her soul.

Firmly, he gripped her bare essence -
exhausting the mere breath of her,
as he wrenched the already-fainting
heart within her.

Alas!It was only then
that the Angel of Death
once again haunted her
and his cold and cruel verses
mockingly whispered,
"Finally, this is when
the pain no longer hurts."

Saturday, September 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,broken heart,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Della Perry 13 September 2015

I liked the way it shows how love can be beautiful and yet hurt at the same time. It was fast paced, I enjoyed reading this. Well done, good imagery too.

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You comments are welcomed, Della. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 12 September 2015

A well written and chilling poem, Collette. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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Chilling. Tormenting.

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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2019

A poignant piece of poetry well articulated and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A very passionate write.

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Thank you so much, Chinedu.

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W Gray 09 October 2015

Well-written, loved the choice of words, gave life to the poem's meaning.

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Thank you for your comments, W. Gray.

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Collette Y Anderson Williams 15 September 2015

Hello Everyone, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Your feedback helps.

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Godfrey Morris 13 September 2015

Awesome write. Enjoyed reading

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