When The Moon Talks. Poem by zeinab sherif

When The Moon Talks.

Rating: 5.0


You forgot me
i see
technology took u away from me
I see
It made u superficial¬ free
I see
It turned u into robots, it killed the true glee

Remember me every day, please
I miss your chitchat which made my soul release
Isolate yourself for a while from technology which made your emotions freeze
&talk 2 me from the window like before
with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

Remember me every day, please I miss your chitchat which made my soul release what a sweet and heartfelt innocent words that you omitted from the core of heart.. well done and its really a good poem and try more to do.. best to write the same way you do...appreciate your work..10+++++++++

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Carol Gall 23 June 2009

great poem good use of words 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 June 2009

Nice poem with innocent imagery. keep writing, Zeinab.

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Merna Ibrahim 23 June 2009

A great poem Zeinab...you are right, the technology is ruining so many things.....good work..keep it up 10++.Merna

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

A bit complex but sweet

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2010

me too, I like this poem like i hear a background music that fits here....

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Kuji Soliman 27 August 2009

i loved this poem so much! ! ! you have a natural gift

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Obinna Eruchie 01 August 2009

A very lovely poem, Zeinab, keep it up.

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Broken Heart 15 July 2009

great poem! ! keep up the awesome writing: D

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 05 July 2009

Really awesome, so lovely heart touching, keep it up mam.......

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