When The Baa Is Heard Poem by ABD ELHAMID REMILI

When The Baa Is Heard

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Where the baa is heard
And the sound is bird
Where the flow is theme
Seen in running stream



When the rain is mist
And the eye is moon
And the river is twist
Fringed with the trees
Where the dove does croon


When the sheep and bird
Voice nature's chord
Chiming with the breeze
Wafting from the trees



It's here where pain is relief
Nothing from town to grief
It's the mountain call
When you're about to fall



Just take only your soul
And wing your fly and stroll
Among the mead and space
Poetry is there to embrace



Come with me and feel
Beside the flocks new thrill
Cliches worn out in streets
Fresh feelings got in the hills



I do not sheep herd
I am just writing word
And i mourn the years
Spent down with fears



If i knew the cheers
Got in virgin beauty of mead
Would never at home stay
Among sheep i would only die



When the baa is heard
When the song is bird
When beauty is word
It's what God has made

When The Baa Is Heard
Thursday, May 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 23 February 2019

Like William Blake....easy fluent....

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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2018

When the baa is heard When the song is bird When beauty is word It's what God has made... the lovely thoughts and music of lines make it an enchanting poem!

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Naila Rais 10 May 2018

A lovely write.... Keep it up.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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hamid 10 May 2018

thank you Naila. welcome to, my page. nice to have you read and commented on my poem. Yes. sure. i shall pay you a visit too soon..stay tuned to your feelings.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2018

When the sheep and bird Voice nature's chord Chiming with the breeze Wafting from the trees........ very fine illustrated with a passing graphic.. thank u for the use of words and ur great imagination....... thank u dear. tony

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hamid 10 May 2018

Thank you Tony for your feedback. its nature in all its charm.no harm to spend a while in the pastures strolling and breathing pure elixir., refreshing the toughts and getting deep insight...

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hamid 10 May 2018

Hi Tony, i am really humbled and glad to have read this little poetry... stay safe God bless my friend.

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