When Shadows Reappear Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

When Shadows Reappear

Rating: 4.2


In the darkness of my nights
Shadows seek shelter.

When darkness descends
On my heart
Shadows of the past
Reappear.
An edifice crumbles
When light and shade play
Behind the black curtains
Of my nights.
A city on fire
Words spew fire
Hearts on fire
A nation on fire!

The Shadow of the Beast
Reappears.

When night withdraws
Shadows of the dreams reappear
And I wake into their cacophony.

Dawn dawns hesitantly
Much later.

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Thursday, April 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: violence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The eternal cycle of violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 May 2016

An insightful depiction of unending circle of nightmares - bunch of sinister shadows that keep the mind in perpetual captivity, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Unnikrishnan.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 May 2016

Hi Chinedu, Thank you very much for reading the poem and offering your comment. And your invaluable comments make me understand my own words in a better way. When I read the poem again, I am proud of myself and humbly bow your extremely poetic words and deep understanding of poetry. You make me humble Chinedu. And Thank you once again.

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Susan Williams 11 August 2017

Here again. And still this poems whispers to me. It never loses any of its impact, any of its dark shadows. If only the human race would whole-heartedly work together to eradicate the evils that are spewed on life from the diseased souls and misshapen hearts. The only way I see to eradicate them is to stop teaching them to our children through our actions or our lack of actions. It's probably trite- but love and kindness in every interaction with our fellow man is the only way I can see to interrupt, detrain, and kill off the cycle.

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Sarah Persson 28 August 2016

Like the nightmare you hold, never an escape, you just have to open your curtains to find another. Very nicely written.

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 August 2016

Thank you Sarah!

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Need of the hour, as everywhere bloodbath and terrorism is in the upper hand, wonderful depiction of violence, when is the dawn.? ..Thanks dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 July 2016

Thank you Saraswathy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

Shadows seek shelter! To respect nature. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 June 2016

Powerful work. How beautifully you have depicted violence through the imagery of shadows n darkness. Its a work par class.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 July 2016

Hi Nosheen, Thank you for such expressive appreciation. A crime against the innocents, man woman or child, haunts us for days! renders our days darker. I am happy that a natural poet like NI could relate to the poem easily. Thank you Nosheen for spending your valuable for me. Obliged.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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