When I Look At You Poem by Bianca Mckay

When I Look At You

Rating: 4.3


When I look at you
I don’t want to look away
Your face brings joy to my heart
I never want to leave your side
I want to be you with you forever and ever
I want to never live without you
But most importantly....
I want you to feel the same way!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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