When I First Saw You! Poem by saloni shevya

When I First Saw You!



In the dead street, i walked alone
I knew my foremost happiness had gone
Struggles and foes all waiting for me
I tried to overcome, but just couldn't see..
Darkness of hatred followed everywhere
I needed someone, someone who did care
A hand stretched to me
Called my name
Wiping my tears i did the same..
You pulled me out, showed me the way
you made me relive, that's the most i can say
From then on you care and forever you will do
I knew from that moment..
WHEN I FIRST SAW YOU...! ..3 3 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saloni Shevya 28 September 2011

thank you..i wrote when i was 12.........thnx for your fabulous comments..

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2011

Enigmatic and Emphatic......well written

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Saloni Shevya 01 September 2011

thank you....! ! ...... :) ..urs r better ones!

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