Whats In My Head? Poem by Kaylee Lafortune

Whats In My Head?

Rating: 4.8


Deal with my pain,
I shall never gain,
I will die,
and begin to fly,
Up to heaven,
Wings spreadin',
And I will join you,
We shall be a crew,
Once again,
We'll fight those men,
We'll kill them all,
Even though we are not tall,
We can if we beleive,
And we shall not deceive,
What we already know is true,
That I will never be with you.
Until.
The.
End.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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