What We Miss Poem by Vaughn Bekker

What We Miss

Rating: 5.0


Early in the morning the sun slowly up does creep
All in the meanwhile we just seem to sleep
All the little birds sit and their songs they chirp
While off to work quickly our coffee we slurp
Outside waits a happy dog to wish us a happy day
Frustrated and in a rush we push him out the way
Driving off to work we miss all the flowers in bloom
Cursing all this traffic, hoping we will get through soon
As we go through the day we miss the gentle breeze
We just seem to busy, the boss we trying to please
And as the sun shines for us at its highest spot
All we complain about is that it is too bloody hot
The sun starts to set and makes way for the moon
Tired and in a rush we want to get home soon
The stars shine high with a twinkle in their eye
We sit back on our chairs with a moan and a sigh
As the moon creeps up right to the top
On our beds we just seem to flop
From a colourful sunrise that eye does please
To the swaying of the branches in the gentle breeze
From all the busy birds that seem to pass us by
Or that lonely cloud fluffy in the sky
Stop and take notice, it`s absolute bliss
So many amazing things, all that we miss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anonymous Butterfly 07 May 2010

I like the lines: To the swaying of the branches in the gentle breeze From all the busy birds that seem to pass us by Or that lonely cloud fluffy in the sky Stop and take notice, its absolute bliss So many amazing things, all that we miss That was beautiful. Many people don't appreciate the beauty of nature and they ignore it. Lucky me I'm the opposite to that. I look up at the sky to see the clouds and the moon and when I don't see it I really get angry. The clouds are beautiful specially when its a rainy day. And the last time I saw the moon it reminded me of Dracula. It was perfect. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

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Christina Phan 07 May 2010

its relaxed n true we need to take time to smell the air n just not rush things gd job for first time keep writing n do wht u luv u do i hope can read n comment my poem

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Olivia Helmes 21 April 2010

This poem has a very realaxed yet upbeat tone to it which is just awesome. The wording is very good and I absolutely loved it. Great job

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