What Was Lovee...X Poem by Jenny O'Kane

What Was Lovee...X



The corners of my mind are going crazy over you,
As i look at the clouds above,
Always wondering if you felt the same way too,
I never knew i was falling in love,

I'll never forget the way you looked that night,
It doesn't feel like this can be real,
Not sure if i'm wrong or if i'm right,
Just needed you to feel the way i feel,

I remember your smile that lit up my face,
I remember your voice that echoed through me,
It felt like it was all falling in place,
You were all i wanted to see,

Love is hard to replace,
A hole empty in my heart,
I look around for your embrace,
Thinking of the time we were led apart!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 27 October 2008

This is really profound Jenny. When we are together, it seems that the love we have for one another will always go on, but then something happens and one of the pair is gone. Then in retrospect we know that it was love, because we are always thinking of the good times that were, and should still be. This is really deep Jenny, a 10 for this. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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