What Separates These Two Fates? Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
What Separates These Two Fates?
Painful ‘tis attacking foes at gates,
Painful if friends leave, leave kindred mates,
Givers both of grave grief,
None rendering relief,
Sure, not much separates the two fates.
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Words well said | 34.11.14 |
A brilliant limerick on foes and friends has been inscribed astutely with poet's note. Nice work.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 5:15:19 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow, what a wonderful and perceptive write. To put this write in the form of limerick is just brilliant. Amazingly entertaining and thought provoking. Loved reading it.
Thanks for the good words. The most difficult part of writing poems is good meaningful thoughts. Putting them well, well somehow is manageable. Here, much credit is deserved by the original Sanskrit verse. I appreciate what you say Rose Marie.