What I Am Poem by Susan Williams

What I Am

Rating: 4.9


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I'm a mountain rising mysterious on the distant horizon
I'm a valley mist rising mystic above the quiet river
I'm a waterfall falling in tumbles deep and tumultuous
I'm a stream streaming slowly over smooth river stones
I'm a forest wild and primeval dark and deep
I'm a prairie waving golden in the wind
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But mostly
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I'm the lips of moonlight on your face
I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair
I'm the sun rising in your early morning blue eyes
I'm the sun setting fire at the end of your day
I'm the thought wandering through your mind
I'm the memory haunting your dreams
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~~~~~~~~~~©December 2021, Susan Williams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 December 2021

the beauty of this came through loud and clear Bravo!

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Susan Williams 06 January 2022

LeeAnn, you know how to encourage a fellow poet, my dear! ! ! Thank you! ! !

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Susan Williams 14 August 2022

thank you so very much for these kind words

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 16 January 2022

A marvelous composition! Simply overwhelming!

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

Susan, You seem to have 'worn a l ot of hats'! ! I really think you have a Multiple-personality Disorder! ! ! See a shrink; I DO HAVE a license, but you'll have come to my office in Sri Lanka. : ) Dr. Bri, at your service.

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2023

A riddle? Who might 'I' be, pray tell. bri : )

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2022

But mostly. I'm the lips of moonlight on your face I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair I'm the sun rising in your early morning blue eyes

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2022

I'm a mountain rising mysterious on the distant horizon

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2022

Hi Susan, this is an awe inspiring poem --So beautiful!

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Susan Williams 14 August 2022

I am pleased that you found beauty and inspiration in this, my dear poetess

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