What Does Nature Feel Like Poem by Chuy Amante

What Does Nature Feel Like



When my eyes were brighter
I saw the spectrum
of colorful blessings
filling my atomic structure

now my primary sense
is touch
what is nature to you?

I feel nature
pine needle points
gooey sap
smooth rocks
weighty rocks
pointed rocks
jagged edges
splinters
the sting of redwood
under skin
I feel the bite
of the insects
the hairs of a bears
hide stuck to crusty
bark
I feel the cold water
rushing next to hot rock
I feel dust
grains and gravel
I feel dew on leaves

I fill my senses
by feeling
naturally

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 11 November 2015

a very intense and fresh poem! Rocks are really impressive!

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