What Do You See When You Read.. Poem by Mindless minds

What Do You See When You Read..



What do people see when they look at me?
Do they see me?
Or do they see bits and pieces of me?
What lies within of me.
My confident, awkwardness
My fantasized, coolness.
My tremendous, loserness.
They say this is the real me.
Do I believe what people see when they look at me?

Do they see the concealed Me.?
Or do they see what lies outside of me.
My lopsided stride.
My unzipped fly.
My mismatched attire.
What people see when they look at me..
its not the real me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 19 October 2008

First glance with a first impression, Gazing through as days pass by- people sees the inner you...Nice read, Thanks.

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Manonton Dalan 19 October 2008

a chuckling face trying to outwit my senses by typing dynamic words conspiring to dazzle my pea brain. hmmm... you haven't said a lot it's just my mind trying to over-analyze. lol thanks.md

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Trinity K 19 October 2008

what they deserve they get...........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! tk c....

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