What Do I Do? Poem by sancheir lewis

What Do I Do?

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What do i do when i am all alone?
What do i do when i have no home?
What do i do when theres no one to call?
What do i do when i fall?
What do i do when i can't come around?
What do i do when i get stuck to the ground?
What do i do when i want to cry?
What do i do when the tears won't fall if i try?
Someone tell me what to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 29 August 2005

Sancheir, take Mahnaz's excellent advice. She's a very good writer and a very nice person. Best of luck, Jerry

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Lylyanna Pilewski 20 July 2005

wow I jsut had to comment on that one again it sounded much lik eone that I worte it's called 'Questions' check it out you might like it you might not but chech it out anyways if you want. Lylyanna

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A. B. 16 June 2005

You really are a good poet. i liked all your poems. Not to worry, , , you'll always find that there's will be someone around, , , in times of despair.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 15 June 2005

Love it I really agree with everyone else who commented on this one. Keep it up. Lylyanna

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 June 2005

keep writing open your heart and answers will come :)

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