Wearing The Sky Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Wearing The Sky

Rating: 5.0


Your sky blue
summer dress

hung now
to dry

against an open window

almost
invisible

disappearing into
the blue

like a Magritte
painting

birds suddenly
vanishing and then
appearing again

like a Bermuda Triangle

the soft chatter
of its hanger

talking to
the window

as it argues
with every passing breeze

you
nakedly
dreaming.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 30 January 2008

Arguing with every breeze...what a perfect image...and she, lying naked for her dress is blowing in the breeze....wonderful images, perfect summertime picture for a cold winter day...

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Dee Dee Wright 27 January 2008

Simply? Delicious! Such imagery! I feel like warapping your words around me and wearing them out...and wearing them out with repeating them to my self! Your words are the clothes I wish for. love Debbie Debs

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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