We Two Were Walking Together Poem by Amitava Sur
We Two Were Walking Together
Walking in a misty night –
It was moon lit then.
We two were walking through
Firmly holding our hands.
Snow bids were falling around us
Like flower petals were welcoming us.
My love being held in my hand
I felt to be strolling in heaven.
She was smiling and staring at me
With a comforting joy in her eyes.
My happiness knew no bound
Seeing her to be with delight.
Walking in a misty night –
It was moon lit then.
We walked past the stars and moon
Along the galaxy we were walking then.
A land of love and sublime peace
Was there all around.
I was walking with my love along
And witnessed the Paradise both.
We two were walking through
Firmly holding her hands.
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Amative (12.05.2014) 1-00 am
A feeling of 30 (-) . A beautiful. if i could read this poem during 30th of my life i would have enjoyed this poem practically. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
Hello poet Amitava Sur. Please to make you acquaintance. I have just recently return to PH, once I found a little extra time. It helps me unwind. You have written deeply and beautifully about one you love and love being with, I like the imagery and the message. Well done, Loyd PS Come by and visit my work when you have time. Loyd
A lovely poem to read, thanks for presenting it. In the lines of the first and the last stanzas: 'Firmly holding her hands.' - If you substitute 'her' by 'our', methinks it would sound nicer, but of course, the choice is yours. 'My love being held in my hand I felt to be strolling in heaven.' - Beautiful! I too love holding hands of my loved ones. I have many poems where I've mentioned it.
Walking through the misty moonlit evening, enjoying the comforting closeness of your love. Happiness holding no bounds as you held her hands. A very touching poem, Amitava, beautiful expression of your love. A gentle quietness appears from within your poem and brings a calm serenity. Wonderful poem. Love it. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/28/2024 11:27:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The beautiful poem is a nice imagination.