When the moon dances on the edge of a pond
My wish turns to fishes and swims along
The milky white water reflects my desire
I see the constellation of stars flashing fire
Today, the moon came down in my eyes
To tell the story of reflection of light
The sun is indeed a great source it said
I am the borrower, he is the master of the trade
This sun has burnt the moon umpteen times
The patch we see is a scar left as a sign
Yet moon never shy away to borrow the lights
The reflection is nothing but a love divine
On earth we expect a lot from our lovers
We fight for material things and body's pleasure
We are not ready to take any burns
A slight heated moment takes ugly turns
We have many lessons to learn from the moon
The light, the reflection, the calmness and patience
It cannot come down to teach us everything
The limits it has set for the love is amazing.
Beautiful imagery and metaphor. Human beings are a thankless lot. We unappreciate our blessings and are quick to anger
Beautiful poem, so much to learn from anything else and elsewhere, not only from the moon, but this is an amazing poem, Asim Sir! a 10 +++++
Nature! ! ! With natural laws! Learning from the moon as well. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
If we have not watched the dance of moon, of course we have missed many things. Moon's tender growth, calmness, love and dwelling motivate poetic mind. You are a nice nature lover and you have perfectly watched moon. We have to learn many values from moon. This is an excellent poem.
This is real creative thinking, moon in love with sun and suffered the burn and still borrowing the light to reflect on earth. Brilliant! ! ! 10 This sun has burnt the moon umpteen times The patch we see is a scar left as a sign Yet moon never shy away to borrow the lights The reflection is nothing but a love divine
Moon dances on the pond with a reflection of calmness and beauty. The desires are reflected through eyes and vision when heart beats with feelings of calm moon.Calmness and patience we much inherit from moon to get the beauty of love and lovers truly watch moon. A great imagery with perception is excellently presented. A nice poem is well penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Magnificent, Asim. There is truly never darkness, no conquest of night, when we realize the moon is there, providing guidance. This verse goes to myfavourites! A perfect 10!