We Had Our Chance Poem by Dave Alan Walker

We Had Our Chance

Rating: 3.9


We had a body
we had a mind
we had a choice
we had our chance
but we didn't use any of it

Now we are but
a vessel upon this earth
carrying the souls
of what's to come

They will put right
what we did wrong

We had our chance

Sunday, October 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2018

Now we are but A vessel upon this earth Carrying the souls The ultimate truth has been revealed in simple yet most authentic manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.10++

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Muzahidul Reza 28 October 2018

Well drafted, loved it, But, dear poet, automatically nothing will come, for well being everything we have to try, ....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

Having chance of positive perspective in life is great. Having a mind of beautiful choice is definitely favorable for life. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2018

Dave, such an inspiring poem..............................

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Solomon Senxer 09 November 2018

Maybe we still have chance as long as we are alive and healthy, if I do not misread you! Heheheh!

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Dipti Deori Borah 06 November 2018

Beautiful poem with nice feeling

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2018

They will put right what we did wrong ......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

Our time has passed, time to make way for the next ones. But when was our time over? Great poem!

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

A thought provoking poem, how often we misuse our resources and then repent. Great write,10+

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