We Are Too Consumed With Life Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

We Are Too Consumed With Life

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We are too consumed with life
While Life by us is passing by;
Never seems enough the Time,
Nor can we admit its inevitable ‘good-bye'.

Some early dreams so full of promise,
By heart truly believed, —made true,
And all towards them was a compromise,
And when achieved, —no more a dream.

Each dream's a step in life's pyramid,
Like oxygen—vital, and consuming life;
And as we climb, so does the greed,
And when at peak, —the end of life.

We are too consumed with life
While Life by us is passing by:
One day, too late, we realise…
That was our Life, and its ‘good-bye'.

Friday, February 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,greed,life and death,philosophy,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

We're too consumed with life While Life by us is passing by; Never seems enough the Time, Nor can we admit its inevitable good-bye......nice beginning bearing a nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Terry Craddock 08 December 2016

'Some early dreams so full of promise By heart truly believed, made true; And all towards them was a compromise, And when achieved, -no more a dream.' reads like Shakespeare, reminds me of 'A Midsummer Night's Dream', beautiful

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Each dream's a step! Nice work.

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