Watching Show On Earth ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Watching Show On Earth ~

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Life has become a continuity of dreams
And I live between the two breaths
One says let's go and other says stay and fight
The pen has the fire to burn the mountain
But my thoughts take to the depth of the ocean
And I hang like those stars in the galaxy
I wait and watch silently the show on earth.

Monday, February 14, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 14 February 2022

We are all spectators in life's great events and catastrophes. We have a ringside seat, though I'd rather at times to sit near the door! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2022

Life is a continuum of dreams and incidents and we are mere spectators, as David has opined. The drama goes on, with us or in spite of us…..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 February 2022

Doc, yr words seem excellent for today

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Mamta S 15 February 2022

Wonderful poem with clear message.

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Nabakishore Dash 15 February 2022

Wait and watch is a good principle revered Dr. Nehal.

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Juhaina Tumlu 15 February 2022

It is the greatest show on earth and are we playing our part in it? ? ?

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Tihama Hykam 15 February 2022

Yes we all are doing the same. Good poem.

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Shreya Hacks 15 February 2022

Yeah between the two breath we all live and enjoy, awesome philosophical poem.

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