Warning Poem by Susan Williams

Warning

Rating: 5.0


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Warning: A mass migration of flocks
of the common Trashbird and Junkbird variety
has commenced and is now underway.
We recommend extreme caution if you are traveling
Route D2LR
The migration route extends
only from the den to the living room
so travelers should expect to be suffering mightily from
all the Stuffitis and WhateverwasIkeepingthatforitis and Noroomtositdownitis
maladies normal to the mass migration of these birds...
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~~~~~~~~~~©2019 Susan Williams

Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Spring Cleaning Humor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2019

The migration route extends. The warning is given to recover them from the danger. Normal to the mass migration of these birds attracts attention of poetic mind and for their safety poet's heart cries. Spring Cleaning Humor is amazingly expressed in this poem. This is a thought provoking poem shared.10

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Susan Williams 12 April 2019

spring cleaning makes such a mess in my house! ! ! ! Thank you for reading!

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Sandra Feldman 08 April 2019

At least with this Mocking bird poem We have a humoristic reminder Of Spring cleaning due, Which made us smile Making the unwanted chores Much easier to do. Never lose your sense of humor, especially when unwanted, troublesome birds are around. Thanks for the laugh and don't overdo. We always need you. as our irreplaceable, Susan.

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Susan Williams 12 April 2019

you have got to be the sweetest member of PH- -your poetic comments and your so loving comments give striggling writers such a lift! ! God bless you dear! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 13 September 2020

Anjandev- - had to have some fun after all that work! ! ! thabk you for enjoying your read! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 11 September 2020

......the den to the living room......brilliant........thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 10 September 2020

Mj- - - hahahahahahahaha- - I like that memory, I shall have to find nicknames for my clutter! ! ! That's one thing about being writers- -we get to make-up stories and not be called liars! Thank you for enjoying my humor! ! ! !

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2020

Never stand in the way of a migration! ! This poem stirred a memory...all the way back in college I knew someone who needed to make way for such migrations, but never got around to it. Instead, he actually did begin referring to the clutter as his 'roommate.' I now see that as proof of any assertion that things do indeed assume their own identity....I always hope that identity makes room for migration. Brilliant verse, Susan. A perfect 10!

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Soran M. H 04 February 2020

Here very cleverly has used flocks to address the main theme of the poem, then the technique of putting these 2 long words to be washed...we have to be careful..always the great poet trying to renewing their form and language too...susan always bright...well done

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Susan Williams 17 March 2020

I have a ridiculous sense of humor that I love turning loose on the common housewifely chores I have to do instead of fub stuff like riding or writing! ! I am glad you enjoyed my run together words!

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