War, Self-Created Poem by tara fortier
War, Self-Created
The water flowing nicely
The current coming swiftly
The boat is floating steady.
These fish have lost the war
with the rod in which im holding
and i have lost the war in this world
in which im living
In this war we call earth
we try to be the best against the rest.
we've created the fight in which were losing.
victory, impossible.
Friday, July 31, 2009
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5/4/2024 6:32:00 PM # 1.0.0.1119
These fish have lost the war with the rod in which im holding and i have lost the war in this world in which im living great and pictographic effects are found in this poem.. one can fel your rich idea and the expression is very much poetic and even melodic too..well done