War Field Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

War Field

Rating: 3.1


The next missile 'AGNI-3' has been -
successfully launched.
It is another feather on the cap for the-
Indian defense is'nt it?
This missile could travel 3500 miles
from here - what if this missile
lands on some 'Indian' who is living there?
What could be done?
The going of further and further in this-
missile making by one and all-
Nations- is they say is to keep us apart.
Fright will keep us apart they say
What is the big achievement about -
Frightening others?


Let us find some place in the world-
somewhere some place - to conduct our wars
Let them decide and come there-
Whoever wants to fight whoever
Whoever wants to frighten whoever
Let them all come there
Let us have a direct telecast of the war
Let it be an one dayer or a seven dayer-or
Let it go on till everybody dies
Let us watch it and enjoy it
Let us feel proud of our nations achievement-if any

Just leave the habitant world alone
Let us prevent the world from becoming a war field
There doesn't seem to be any big difference
Between terrorism and our kind of nationalism

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 05 January 2009

Excellent idea here...a place for war would be good...even better would be an end to war...brilliant write...thank you

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Kesav Easwaran 28 January 2009

ideas unusul and different...impregnated by the goodness of mind...a good write on a theme that is much debatable...10

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Pandian Angelina 02 July 2009

WoW! Outreaching - your thoughts! Could you get me a ringside view With you as commentator of the show! I would be happy to watch them Die off the earth and let us live in Peace! I say it in a lighter vien, but, You know, 'am as serious as you. Angel

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Catrina Heart 28 March 2009

No one wins in war, in the battle field where blood runs, lives gone, all similar stories from the yester memories of war till date, nothings changed except for the improvements of weapons....Great poem, a poetic awareness....+++A

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Sandra Martyres 26 March 2009

Very noble poem....I only wish the war mongers could read it...10

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Isaac Maliya 15 March 2009

This is a great poetic verse deserving of reciting by our war-mongering leaders. What if the world was devoid of war? A better place to live? Better live in peace than in a state of war.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 January 2009

The first war was Cain killing his brother Abel. It just grew.9 billion people size

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