~~~! War Call! ~~~ Poem by Joshua Cheung

~~~! War Call! ~~~

Rating: 5.0


In tanks and trucks, off we go
Into the battlefield, can't say no
Let bullets fly, let blood flow
Don't let your mercy show.

Those suicide bombers are a pain
We as British will always know they're beyond insane
They're so stupid and pathetically lame
They'll regret it when they die, they'll be in shame.

Gun in hand, battlefield in turmoil
Killing the terrorists, on we toil
This is my story of modern-day war
Would you like to give me an encore?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

nice poem! : ] i really like it. so appropriate for today, too much war in this world!

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Sarah Abdullah 17 March 2008

Nice poem ^_^ Good write

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Rajinder Singh 16 March 2008

lovely poem.for a child of 13 yrs to write such beautiful poem future is bright.

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Sarah Macbean 15 March 2008

I agree, this is a wonderful poem. It shows all of the emotion. I give you ten also!

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 14 March 2008

hey joshua that was a great poem my grandfather was in the war in the UK and he died for the love of his country but great work i give it a perfected ten

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