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If I was a Soldier, I would bend the barrel of my gun...and towards the enermy, I would run.

I would wash, my war torn bloody rags... and turn them into, beauitiful white flags.

I`d pick some flowers on my way,
and to the enermy, I would say.

Lets all go home, and live to fight... another day.

James Urwin

Monday, December 24, 2012

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I liked the start of this but could`nt find a good ending...I struggled to try and not sound like a coward...? ...I mean it to be anti-violence kinda thing? if ya get me? It needs further work.

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John Brown 28 December 2012

Don't worry, I know what you are trying to say James. I wrote a poem, also called 'War' that you might like.

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Terry O'leary 24 December 2012

The cowards are those who go to a foreign land and blow little kids to pieces... Good poem

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