Wandering Souls Poem by Richard Blay

Wandering Souls

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful black bees.
Eagerly flying confusingly.
East, West, North, South.
Seeking just a place to sting.

Sunday, October 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This acrostic poem is about our daily activities as humans; we move up and down and in all directions not literary as if we are confuse or (insane) but just to (work and) get something as a daily bread. I was inspired by the ' Central Market ' in Kumasi- Ghana.]
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 30 March 2014

A wondrous poem. I really like it. Bien!

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Rachel Butler 25 October 2011

'Seeking just a place to sting' RAB

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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