If Minds Were As Brooks Poem by Richard Blay

If Minds Were As Brooks

Rating: 3.5


till the human pages crunch at their death
the human mind will forever book
every evil deed done to it
making imagination
of revenge consuming
the precious time to
paint, write poetry,
sing, invent,
or to
love.
but
if minds
were as brooks—
wherein leaves, twigs
are carried away
whenever they do fall
making these brooks always fresh—
not even an err will they book
they will move on— forgive, forget, love—
making the mind a tool for progressing.

2014

Monday, December 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Micha Memory Asime 01 January 2015

Great read...a nicely written poem

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Micha Memory Asime 01 January 2015

Great read...a nicely written poem

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Richard Blay 29 December 2014

thanks Gangadharan, nature is full o fpositive lessons, I hope we learn from it

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 29 December 2014

A good imaginative poem and likes it.

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