Walking Through The Village Road Poem by Geeti Sudha

Walking Through The Village Road

Rating: 5.0


Once I set out for a walk
to experience the beauty of nature,
to feel the presence
of the great ocean to a simple creature.

I walked through the muddy roads
and through the fields green,
looking at the huts
admiring the village scene.

I felt the rushing rivers
and their heart soothing flow,
I felt the dancing rain
that sings a joyful strain.

The swinging of the branches
the blossoming of flower,
the wait of the farmers
for a heavy shower.

The huge vast grasslands
where the children play,
I saw the potters
busy with their pots of clay.

The soft cool breeze
that swims with calmness and with ease,
the chirping of the birds
the grazing of the cattle herds.

Group of people near fire wood
warming their body up,
women wearing a hood
serving tea in the earthen cup.

I was away from the world of noise
away from pollution of the city,
away from the merciless place
to somewhere where people had sympathy and pity.

Once I set out for a walk
to get rid of the brain's load,
to feel the real beauty of nature
walking through the village road.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2015

An amazing description of rural life.......................10

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Purusottam Chuli 04 January 2015

Rustic scenic beauty of nature is in the click of mouse now. It is preferred today even at the cost of brain overloading. let's hope for the best.

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Chinedu Dike 02 January 2015

A good train of thoughts well encapsulated into a lovely poem. I like the articulation of the poem as it captured the beauty, serenity, freshness, peace...of nature, as well as how invigorating a walk through nature could be. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Geeti Sudha

Geeti Sudha

Kesinga, kalahandi, Odisha
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