Wake Up! ! ! ! Poem by MarcDaniel Paul

Wake Up! ! ! !

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In the dark shadows of your soul,
I delved for the flames of truth
For so long,
I tried to feed your mind,
But your effortless failures only led me to dilemmas
Is my patience eternal?
Isn’t my flesh from humanity? ?
My constant undesired results,
Have now become boring
And in the obscure I still wonder
Will your spirit ever cross that bridge! ?
That bridge of darkness;
That has paralyzed your being?
Will your spirit ever break that chain of blindness! ?
Someday! ?
My hope is still deeper than the sea….
But my expectations,
Have not even yet put on pants
Wake up! ! ! ! !
And gaze into the vision of light!
For your brawn,
Have not described your true strength
You hold the vigor of a tiger
A love that comes from above
A spirit that is immortal
A gift, not yet unwrapped
But wake up!
For I know it’s the only way,
To make your dream come true
Wake up!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

Well expressed...good job

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NoName DeletedAccount 05 December 2009

good poem :) love it, write more :)

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Emily Core 04 December 2009

sweetness i loved it

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Danny H 04 December 2009

expectations have not even put on pants, cute, and funny this poem shows you have a lot of potential as a poet. Keep it up

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Danielle May 04 December 2009

this is realy good! ! !

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