Waiting In Vain Poem by Mary Joy Lumanog

Waiting In Vain

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It seems like a thousand years
To see my life to bear a pear
It's so hard to comprehend
Trying hard not to depend
On things I use at hand
To make things to rise

Waiting seems just like a dream
Trying seems like no end
Suffer for there is no bound
Cry for tears is for last

To promise is a word to say
But waiting is hard to make it stay
Making it happen is just like a surmise
It end up just like for a cipher
A wind that can never grasp

Hoping is just like nothing
To wonder just to feel brighter
But never could it come
For waiting just it all are
Just like a thousand years
That had gone!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Heart 18 July 2009

waoo! ! nice poem! ! loved it 10++ frm me: D

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Kerry O'Connor 18 July 2009

You have chosen a universal theme, which many readers will recognize. I like the lines: 'To promise is a word to say / But waiting is hard to make it stay.'

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Mary Joy Lumanog

Mary Joy Lumanog

Bacolod City, Philippines
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