Waiting Poem by Richard Millar

Waiting

Rating: 4.5


Every day,
at exactly
two-o-clock
the boy
on
the bike
comes bye-
He never stops...
Just pedals past-
Mudguards rattling.
The boy
on
the bike.
Does he see me?
Should I wave?
If I lift my hand,
Will he see
I'm blind?

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: waiting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Close your eyes to see.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 22 November 2015

Very powerful images in few words. That which have left me in deep reflection....10

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2015

All senses play a part. Thanks, Richard

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Fabrizio Frosini 01 November 2015

''Close your eyes to see'' Thanks for sharing your nice poem and also the poignant note, Richard Be blessed

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Rohit Singh 01 November 2015

seems like you took inspiration for this poem from a real life incident.

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