Waiting Poem by Jake Quan

Waiting

Rating: 3.5


Waiting for her or waiting for me?
Why is it so hard to be.
The
More
You
Try
The less you see
Waiting for life or waiting to die.

Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,deep,life,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 25 August 2015

Nicely done, Jake. Most of the time life seems like a long wait, ultimately for death.

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