cant believe how the nights became so calm without you..
i know am still thinking of you but just know that am not missing you..
maybe am still loving you too..
but dont think that i cant hate you..
you left me broken without turning around too see how much i've suffered & how much u hurted me..
you walked away like i didnt meant anything to you..
i felt the pain of every single lie you lied to me.. and it was hard to get out of it..
i wish one day you'll be back for me to start all over again and only that time you'll feel my pain you'll suffer like i did til the end..
you'll leave this world screaming just to find a way to get me back..
wait for it..you'll feel what i felt..you will feel my pain soon..
** i wrote this poem in my own words**
so i hope u like it..! !
SARA
wow.. your last words... very strong meaning behind it.. one whom makes you cry, isnt even worth the sight.. forget and leave behind.. on to better days..
Whose words if not you lol.Unless you part take in plagiarism.Wow nice words of yours indeed.Yeahh he' ll wait for you dear.
Innocent love poem, nicely writin, cute teen age feeling in it like it...
this is too good for words.....it left me speechless and u r still an amzing writer! ! ! i hope u dont mind tht i print this off and show it to my friends
words done from true love...........can see the pain n longing care in your lines dark girl.....n the way yu tried to express your pain to the one whom u loved much s awesome.....sebastine....10++.........
We've all been there and felt that. Teriffic job and keep up the good work...Jeff.
i am so touched by this poem.i remember a time where ive felt lke this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is a narrow gap in love and hatred. But, hatred is not the solution for betrayal. Try to absorb the reality. Be compassionate. Anyway nicely penned. And 10 to encourage you.